Paragraph 8 of a SC Brief Help

[StillPaying]

I was hoping to gain some more assistance from you, or anyone, on how to word this.

I see errors in each one of your statements and updated version.

If you continue to write your own material and go at this alone, I don't see anything going well for you with your case. You say you have a lawyer; let them properly write/represent you. This is not helping.

[Hide on Bush]

I see errors in each one of your statements and updated version.

Errors such as what?